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Mar. 8th, 2004 10:04 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Whoo hoo! Only, um, seven weeks late, I've gotten going on Broken Glass Slippers again. Finally figured out I wasn't moving because the character didn't want to move on from her loss, and incorporated that into the narrative, as![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
cadhla suggested. Not so happy with this bit -- a lot of tell, compared to show -- but it'll do for a draft. What happens is the right thing to happen, just not sure about how.
Also, the city of Seattle will recognize gay marriages made by its employees
Mer
Whoo hoo! Only, um, seven weeks late, I've gotten going on Broken Glass Slippers again. Finally figured out I wasn't moving because the character didn't want to move on from her loss, and incorporated that into the narrative, as
cadhla suggested. Not so happy with this bit -- a lot of tell, compared to show -- but it'll do for a draft. What happens is the right thing to happen, just not sure about how.Also, the city of Seattle will recognize gay marriages made by its employees
Mer
